AlexT

A very well written poem. Extremely interesting that you chose the formatting to be in Old English! Steady meter, which a reader such as myself is always grateful for. Old ...

A generally good story with a decent plot. I'm Alex, and today I shall be your reviewer! Let us begin. I have a problem with the second sentence—"His straw-made shoes ...

Great job! Very deep with lots a meaning. Grammatical errors: In the second stanza I don't think that you meant to capitalize "Stroke". If it was on purpose, my bad. ...

Good job on this. I noticed that you made several errors, one of them recurring over and over again. In the first paragraph: "...out of James eyes,..." James should be ...

Alright, before I start giving you criticism, I'd like to comment on your brilliant word choice.  For some reason that just stood out to me. Spelling/Grammar Mistakes: In the first ...

Ohhh I liked this so much! It was very soulful as well as meaningful. I didn't identify any spelling errors...that is one thing that I'm really big on. Critique: I ...

Ah, I love it! It has a smooth sci-fi feel to it. I was definitely enticed. I saw no grammatical or spelling errors which was fantastic! That takes a lot ...

Okay---first off, I'm simply going to tell you the layout of this review. I'm afraid it might be confusing if I don't. First, I will put any grammatical error or ...

Very intriguing! First off...I wanted to ask for you to give me some grace as to my spelling--it's rather difficult on the device I'm using. Grammatical and spelling errors: I ...

Hmmm..Overall, I found the story very interesting. I could tell it was written with passion and emotion. The song and emotion were well-chosen. There were several good metaphors, and so-so ...

Ooooh, enticing! I really like the general idea of where this story might go. You totally left me hanging, which as an author is a good thing. I liked how ...

Sorry, but this particular review will not have any critique, Veritas. I loved everything, and found no errors. All this review will contain is what I loved about this short ...

First off--things that I really enjoyed and I thought were well written: I absolutely loved the fairytale metaphor, as well as the poem's title. I could clearly see the scene ...

Love it. Very meaningful, with good moral values. I liked how you used the metaphor of people being mirrors. That was a very creative notion. I don't really have any ...

It seems like I'm back for another review on Chapter 2, huh? The first chapter was just so good, I could resist. Some more irony---I play the violin. Let's get ...