Alchemist

Short reply: This is a story about how my friend tries to burn me with a cigar when we hang out. Intention is to make such a joke dramatic, I ...

Hey, thanks for reading it, I'm glad you liked it!

Thanks for reading it! I actually have few chapters out here, but I won't post too much here, since people didn't really seem to like it, it's kinda discouraging! xD ...

Thanks for the read and review Noelle! :)

Hmm, well nothing too important to comment on happened, nice description of the castle. You have some nitpicks and typos around too :P

Ahhh, happened to me quite a few times too. xD

Thank you for your awesome review! I certainly do agree with quite some of the things suggested, and I will work on them as soon as possible! Thanks for the ...

Hi, thanks for review! Quill, well I didn't know that, thank you a lot. :) yes I know there are numerous typos here, I noticed it after I posted but ...

Hi, and thank you very much for read and review! You have actually commented on something I'm really, really uncertain about so thank you. It is my writing style, I'm ...

I will review this later, need to study now. :(

Thanks for reveiwing! I promise I will tell you next time, somewhy I forgot to shoutout for this one..xD I know what do you mean. Actually, it is somewhat important ...

Thanks for the review! Im glad you felt like that, I will certainly have a lot of character developement to do, and will be real careful about that one. Yeah ...

Hey, can I also ask you to say everything that's on your mind while reading? I really need someone to tell me straight-forward: you are fine, or you suck. xD ...

Sounds great! Thanks for reading, and sorry for making you confused! XD

hey, the full chapter is out, I hope you can read it and give me your opinion! :)