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Re: POD 30:1 -Helpless (Rewrite)
This is a much better court room scene, very realistic!!! I hope I'm doing this in the right order...argh! Alainna xxxxxxxx
May 17, 2007 -
Re: Ice Cubes #25
Yay, more ice cubes!!! You're on a roll now!!! Good choice of lesson; everyone does weird stuff in History! And a very creative idea, too. Alainna xxxxxxxx
May 17, 2007 -
Re: POD 29- Reminiscence and Regret -On Both Accounts
dom......dom......dom........ The suspense is horrible!!! I can't take it!!! I'm off to read more!!!!! Alainna xxxxxxxx
May 13, 2007 -
Re: Ice Cubes #24
Hello Meevs!! This was really good, I liked the description of Nick; however some of the stuff Jaimiy has started saying seems a little out of place.... Has he developed ...
May 13, 2007 -
Re: Ice Cubes #23
Awww!!! Poor Jaimiy. :( Great writing Meevs, Keep it up!! Alainna xxxxxxx
May 13, 2007 -
Re: POD 21- Apologies -On both accounts
Great work, I'm really loving it!!! I liked your metaphor you used as well! I'm off to read more.... Alainna xxxxx
May 12, 2007 -
Re: Ice Cubes #21
Whoa, where has this side of Jamiy come from? HeHe. Good come back Meeves. I really liked this piece. Can't wait for more! Alainna xxxxx
May 9, 2007 -
Re: POD 9- A fate worse than falling
Another great part, so good that I can't really say much about it. I wish I had started reading this when you first started posting!!! Alainna xxxxxx
May 6, 2007 -
Re: Phantom of the Opera?
I've seen the film and the musical (which I loved) but never read the book.......I'll check it out......... Alainna xxxxx
Apr 30, 2007 -
Re: Lyla part 5
Thank you to everyone who has read this!!! :D JC- I changed the wording so hopefully it's easier to understand. Thanks for the tips!!!! I haven't read that book but ...
Apr 30, 2007 -
Re: Lyla. Part 4
LOL!!!!!!!! Thanks for the crit Meevs............ Don't scream..........but I haven't even started part 5. This weeks just been mad! I'll let you know when i post it!! Alainna xxx
Apr 19, 2007 -
Re: Simple Joys
I really liked this. It suited it to be short. It's the sort of poem that would brighten up your day, which is a rare form of poetry these days!!!! ...
Apr 18, 2007 -
Re: TIME
This is good, what genre of music would it be? It sounds kinda country. This didn't make sense: people can point and they and holler Great work, keep it up ...
Apr 16, 2007 -
Re: Ice Cubes #17
Lol, I like the fact that this boyfriend might be it something Sappy is prone to? I also like the jealousy...very realistic. Keep going Meeves!! Alainna xxxxxxx
Apr 15, 2007 -
Re: Husband and Wife.
Ok. I think I missed the point of this piece slightly, is there more to it? You kept missing the letter 's' off the end of words. What was it ...
Apr 14, 2007