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Re: Ballad Of Maryling And Christian
Thanks for all the crits, I will come back to this when I'm feeling brave and re-do it. Alainna xxxxxxx
Jun 14, 2007 -
Re: Somewhere Else Continued.
Thanks for the crit Gen. One day I may expand on this....
Jun 14, 2007 -
Re: POD 34 squared -Growing up
ARGH.................................. Good in-between chapter. Makes the suspense EVEN worse....... Alainna xxxxx
Jun 14, 2007 -
Re: POD 34 -Voices
Argh....the suspense is killing me!!! Short but good, I'm fully submerged in your style of writing! Keep it up and PM me when you post more as the portfolios are ...
Jun 12, 2007 -
Re: Hurt
Thank you for everyone's replies and comments. I never write poems, in fact I avoid them, however I was feeling very emotional at the time when I wrote this. Thank ...
Jun 3, 2007 -
Re: "Double Dad"--- Chapter 6
This was indeed extremely short! I did like it though. I like the detail about Lavender. Please try and post more in one go, as it's hard to crit like ...
Jun 3, 2007 -
Re: Tears of Lecraesa: Prologue
That was soo descriptive and....beautiful. I really liked it. I can't really crit it properly because I can't find anything wrong with it!!! Thumbs up from me, Alainna xxxxxx
Jun 2, 2007 -
Re: The Butterfly Tattoo
OK, I still haven't found anyone who has read this book, so if you have, please step forward! *Scans everyone madly*. Now is the best time to read it as ...
Jun 1, 2007 -
Re: Curious Incident of the Dog in the Night-time
I did like this book, but it isn't one of my favourites. I read it before it was hyped up, which I'm glad of otherwise I may have been slightly ...
Jun 1, 2007 -
Re: Lord of The Rings or Harry Potter?
Once people get their heads out of their butts i think they'll realize that they are both really good! Thank You Author 13!!! That made me laugh and it's sooo ...
May 29, 2007 -
Re: "Double Dad"--- chapter 5
Oooh!! More cliffhanger endings!!! Argh! OK, this was good, but a bit too short.... The last paragraph was very good, it held the piece together. Keep it up, Alainna xxxxxxxx
May 27, 2007 -
Re: Lyla. Part 6
Thank you for all the replies!!! I do realize that it needs to be set out with more spacing, it looks like a huge block at the moment!! I'll try ...
May 25, 2007 -
Re: Sex, Drugs, and Rock & Roll: Part five
Oooooh!! Why she say sure?? Silly girl!! Good ending JC! I liked it although it was evil! Alainna xxxxxx
May 25, 2007 -
Re: Chicken Fried Rice #2
I really enjoyed this part! I do have to agree with Meevs though, I'd like more information on Jon. I'm starting to like Jon and Nikki a lot. Keep up ...
May 23, 2007 -
Re: POD 32 -Promise
Oooh! :oops: Sorry, that was my fault. I can be dopey at times...... See ya, JC, Alainna xxxxxxx
May 22, 2007