Alainna

This was really good, I was hooked from the moment I read the first line. What if her parents wake up and see us? A simple slip-up. You jump to ...

Hey SOPF!! First off, this was good and I think it was compelling (enough for a prologue anyway..). Just a tip: Try to space out your writing so that it ...

Hey Twit! I can only say good about this chapter; I found no mistakes. Just be sure not to over-use some of the can become tiresome. A very absorbing and ...

Oh my! It is completely different! Well, I'm glad you addressed the issue with her running away. and I like the fact that you're showing how screwed up she is ...

Wow. Whence put it beautifully. I have never heard anyone say it better. I only read the first three pages of Eragon before dying, therefore I can not speak much ...

Argh, I finished yesterday. [spoiler]From the moment Fred died onwards I cried. it is the only HP book to reduce me to the state of crying where you are actually ...

This was good, although there wasn't much to it. I think Clau pointed out the mistakes so there's no point me going over them. I really am getting....frustrated with Jamie. ...

This was really good and as I've read the edited version I have no problems with the piece. Sometimes your description got a little bit...long, but you always snapped back ...

:shock: Oh My!!!! Good shock, very gripping. I liked this very much and as my crits go on I'm struggling to find much to say! (Which is a fantastic thing!!!) ...

Wow, I have never seen somebody do this was hilarious! Obviously I know the POD characters well, but I'm unsure with the Illusions characters. Even then, I really got into ...

Ah, this was fantastic JC. I really enjoyed reading it and had to tell my sister to shut up while I read it 'cos I was so engrossed! “but do ...

Has anyone read his newest book? 'A Spot Of Bother' I was on chapter like....64 when the new harry potter came out today so I postponed it until I've finished ...

Hey Lucy, nearly missed this one! Don't ask [s]my[/s] why. Me I put my hands to the rapidly forming bruise and let out a cry of agony. "Ouch!" I wailed. ...

Mmmm...this was good. I didn't really like Liam in Ice cubes but I can see that he's interesting. As she turned on the shower her father suffered a fatal stroke. ...

Any Edward's walking down the street? No, didn't think so. Well, I liked this book but it was a complete let down. So much of it was repetitive and useless. ...