AkeliaTaske

Hey! Just a review! This poem was great, you got the feel of it. There was only a couple things. There were so many lines, and a lot of them ...

Wow. That was....very scary! You did a good job with the mood, the feeling, and it really draws the reader in. It certainly did for me! There was only one ...

Wait, you play limbo? I'm sorry, but I didn't get why the title of this poem was called "Limbo" and the poem had to do with struggling. I mean, what's ...

the world....K, I am COMPLETLY lost. Sorry.

This is SSOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO CUTE!!! That last line was so adorable and touching, and you did a great job with bringing the flashbacks and real life into the view of the ...

AAHHHH!!!!!!!!! I AM SCREAMING SO HARD RIGHT NOWWWW!!!!! OK, in all honesty this is wayyyyy better then my story, and that last sentence.......THE FEEELLZZZ!!!! Calm down Akelia, calm down...Anyway. G

Oh....wow...that was most defiantly different then some stuff I've read. It was pretty good, well written, and well described. But there was something I was having trouble with. You were ...

WOWWW....very creepy!! It was defiantly weird, the entire situation that he was in. And who dyes their hair green?! Anyway, it was nicely written and well described, it gave me ...

This was really sad, and coming from the oldest of 10, it hurts. I know what it's like to have a tough life and see your siblings or another baby ...

Hey, this was really good. A few things I want to point out, you might want to use more flowing words and making the sentences longer instead of keeping them ...

Hey, this is so cool! I really think you did a good job with the writing, and just the whole situation of this made me smile. Now based off the ...