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Hi yamatri! This is such a lovely poem! I really enjoy the way you've set it up. I especially love the language choices! I think the whole "lost love" trope ...

Hi spatula! This is so conversational and yet so powerful at the same time. That's amazing :') Everything is very stream of consciousness and I think that's admirable. It feels ...

Hi Sunflowerdemon3712! This is neat! I'm a big fan of any magic :') The two main characters are really something. Cypress is aggressive and standoffish in the first chapter, but ...

Hi angelbjim12! Ooh I really like this! I'm not usually a fan of romance, but this is sweet! There's a very vintage feeling to this that I enjoy! It feels ...

Hi unseasonedwriter! This is a really intriguing topic to write about! So I don't really play video games that often, but I know a lot of people that do. I've ...

Hi again vampricone! =D It's always nice to read your writing! I'm not familiar with the characters, but I can tell they have a very complicated relationship. I could figure ...

Hi LaneyLane! I love how raw this feels! The emotion is very strong. Addiction is such a complicated thing and I feel like this poem shows that. It's harder to ...

Hi nickoklasyoon! Lovely choice of story! It's a classic. You do a great job analyzing Connie's character! I think her personality is really a big part of the plot and ...

Hi rainforest! I like your username! =D I've been eyeing this poem for a few days now, so I figured I'd review it! I love how you describe things! The ...

Hi spatula! I haven't read much of your poetry, but this is really good! I think you have a very prominent voice, but it's hard to actually describe it. It ...

Hi averyismediocre! I love the title! It's very engaging! This poem is incredibly relatable, and I think that's why it captured my interest the way it did! The way you've ...

Hi Em16! It's cool to see an essay! That's new! I think you did great describing the emotional side of things! Gap years are really interesting to hear about, and ...

Hi again stygianmoon17! I am back for this review since I checked out the last part! Okay everything really got extreme this part! I see why you left the last ...

Hi stygianmoon17! Ooh this is intriguing! I like it so far! I really like the premise here! It's not really stated what exactly is happening, but I think that works ...

Hi LightningFletch! This is super cool! I'm not usually a paranormal fan, but I like this! You definitely planned this out nicely! I love the paranormal investigation, "ghost hunter" vibes ...