Aisho

"The Blue King" is my latest work -- criticism is EXTREMELY WELCOME. I love this novel, and I hope to make it the best it can be, and I can ...

Chapter One! This chapter sets up the rest of the plot, so if you find it dry, I'm sorry, but I generally refrain from jumping headlong into the plot. If ...

EDIT: SORRY ABOUT THE COUNTING ERROR!!!! Lack of sleep can do that, ya know ... ~_~ This is another set-you-up chapter. ;) Baesa and Caelun are very, very, very important ...

I am SO GLAD all of you are critiquing. It really does help a lot. I apologize for info-dumping continuously; I generally set up all my stories like that as ...

Okay, I know y'all are confused and wondering WHERE I'M GOING WITH THIS ... but please, bear with me. If it's the omg-action you're looking for, it's coming, but it's ...

I want to thank everyone for the critique they've given, and *dearly* hope you continue. :] There's nothing more to say except ~ enjoy!! ------------------------------------------------------------- I

I'm not very comfortable with this chapter, so if you see any way to improve it, please, let me know. I cut out a lot, because I had a *ton* ...

Oho! It would appear I have switched gears on you! :D I'm a big fan of the elusive-enemy-random-chapter-appearance style, so here's my random chapter. Also, there's a lot of new ...

Yay! The explanation chapter!! This is the problem with doing this in small increments; if you'd had them all at once, you'd have been confused and kept reading and then ...

Whew! Chapter nine! This is where the story really begins--so there shouldn't be too many info-dumps ahead. This is one of my favorite chapters, simply because I get to talk ...

EDIT: Firstly ... *ashamed*. Secondly ... don't worry about Agulin. You'll need to know him in the sequel, but this is Book I. So relax. Just remember Anull = Big ...

EDIT: yeahyeah well now there's chapter titles >:P lol I posted this half asleep ... even forgot to put "the blue king" on the top ... *sigh* And thus begins ...

Aaand ... more short chapters. I'll go back and combine them later, but for simplicity's sake, they're going to stay this way on YWS. I don't have much to say ...

WARNING: nudity. I debated whether or not to make this "R," but plenty of PG-13 movies are just a little too revealing, so ... I don't know. If you think ...

It's long ... and there's some weak parts ... but I like it. It's very drama. :D Not rated R, because that's not generally how I write, but I have ...

Um, well ... okay. A) The "new characters" are only tools. Don't worry about 'em. B) Talon and J'engar ain't that big. Thus, their armies are pretty small. C) I ...

Oh, Caelun. You misguided little guard. :D You'll see what I mean ... he's one of those guys who'll argue his heart out but never quite understand *what* he's arguing ...

Rated "R" for violence. I figured I play it safe this time. :) PLEASE NOTE: I attached the map of J'engar and Talon to this post. Please, look at it, ...

Not much going on in this chapter ... I really like it for some reason, but -- no swashbuckling or heroic magic. Just moronic cousins and one order of traitorous ...

Eh. That's all I really think about this chapter ... eh. It's weak as chapters go ... I'm tempted to cut out all the story-telling. What do you think? Keep ...

Rated "R" for violence. It's not really *that* violent -- buut -- I suppose if you think about the amount of blood that would issue from the violent act ... ...

Normally I wouldn't post another chapter so soon after the other, but certain restrictions to my free time have sprung up, and as a result I don't know when I'll ...

I told you it'd be a while. =_= I'm so swamped right now. I had a spare five minutes and hurried to post this before I get seriously behind. I ...

Chapter Twenty-six! Whew. :D I'm sorry if the story has been progressing slowly, but I don't like to have my books to be purely action the entire time ... and ...

I was going to combine this with Chapter Twenty-eight, because without the rest this is just so blah, but -- Chapter Twenty-eight is a beast. It's huge. So, no combining ...

Hal's a doubtful little stick, isn't he? Before questions are asked ... neither Daeun nor Ianna liked to be questioned, even in the space of a glance. Hence their mild ...

Ah, Anae. I love her to death. :D There's not much to say about this chapter, except to say -- I'm sorry about dumping Tsuunai in your lap. I felt ...

This is quite possibly my favorite chapter. C: Aedaan is a very interesting character to me, one that I regret to say doesn't play an overly large role in the ...

Well, folks, this is it! C: The reason my novel is titled "The Blue King"! I like this chapter primarily because of the fighting scene. ^_~ Tell me what you ...

I'm combining the two a) because they're both short, and b) because most of Chapter Thirty-two I'm very, very tempted to cut out. Some of it really is essential, but ...

This chapter means a lot to me, mostly because this is what the entire book is about. I don't have much to say about it, because it's mostly self-explanatory. ~*~ ...

Ah, Anull. Chapter Thirty-six has some parts in it that I find exceedingly awkward, but I cannot find a remedy for it. If you spot the parts and have something ...

This chapter is short -- I know it is short -- but nevertheless ... here it is. This is actually the chapter on which the sequel is based, but never ...