Aimushroom

Awww thank you for the amazing review, you remembered my banner too ( ˶>˶˶⩊

Hey there! Thanks for the honest review, to be honest I'm still exploring this particular idea and writing style so I agree it's still kind of messy. I'm not sure ...

Hey, thanks for spotting the typo and suggestion. I'll just edit it real quick hehe ^^

Aww thank you! ^^

Heya! Thanks for the review, I'll keep that in mind next time. I honestly didn't think of any of that when writing this. My usual thought process when making poems ...

It's my original poem, like one of those work you randomly wrote one day and ended up cooking! And yeah you can interpret it that way but what I had ...

Hiii Sophia, welcome to YWS! I hope u like it in here. I actually have a few more poems that tackles some psychological themes too, but things happened and I ...

Ooh I didn't even noticed, I'll try! I'm writing it from the narrators point of view so maybe that's what it makes it natural ^^

Thank you for the review! Ohh, I like this review structure, I'll try it next time I have the chance

Thank you! I have a habit of rhyming things, maybe that will help me improve my rhymes ^^

Thank you for the review I'll keep it in mind next time! Also, when I intended for him (the narrator) to have a love-hate relationship with the girl and is ...

My word! I just joined and this poem hits too close to home! Maybe I'll never be the writer I once imagined I'd become. Maybe I'll just be this girl ...