Adriana

I really liked it, but the idea of Draco crying because he killed a peacock is, in my opinion, a little bit forced. I mean, probably, analyzing what he did ...

It is funny, ironic, really good. But could be more descriptive, for example, you could write some spells, maybe create new ones. Also, you could explore Hermione's presence at the ...

AMAZING!! It's really cute. Besides descripting perfectly well the lack of inspiration, it is like you were actually writting it out of nowhere. The fact that it does not seem ...

In my opion you described perfectly well the feelings of your character. The irony in it is brilliant. You have the ability to make us feel like we are in ...

Absolutely great! The fact that the story had its beggining in Britain reassures the romance. The way you write really makes us feel in love with your craracter too. And ...