Adriana

First of all, I'm sorry it took me too long to read it. I HAD to sleep, it was a hard day. Okay, your story... It's soooo good! Now I'm ...

Great story!!!! I simply love it. Your words at the begining, they are so good and add so much to the story! I just think you should sepparate it in ...

I love it!! At the end I was almost crying, really! I couldn't stop reading your story, which is great... I wish to know more about Jordan... How did he ...

This was the best EVER! I could finally get who is the "Lady", emphatize with the boy, AND with her brother. I guess you could describe a little better Evelyn's ...

Okay, I'm sorry but you lost me here . . . I don't know for sure if I can imagine Evelyn as a child, or a teenage, an adult... Maybe ...

I so love it!!! Well, I won't comment the grammar because I'm not an expert on that, as you know... I really wanted to know more about the mother. I ...

Do you want to make me cry or what??!!! I loved it!! I hear myself gasp Then I start to cry I want myself to stop But I fail on ...

I so love this!! I'm not that much into Jedi stories, but yours is so perfect! I loved the way you described Judy, her thoughts about her father... The way ...

Well, I agree with everything you said here... But this doesn't sound like a poem at all... I'm terribly sorry if that sounds offensive, but that's what I feel... Look, ...

Well, first of all, congratulations! It is a great great poem, but I think the major problem with it is the punctuation. when I turn back] please take of the ...

I so loved this!! It is simple, short and real... It flows perfectly and the rhymes are not forced. You really did a great job! I could not runaway, Even ...

WOW! It is simple, short, yet full of emotion. She forgave him for everything but now when she wanted to forgive him the most… she could not. I loved that ...

First of all, you did a great job here. I really think you should introduce Cameron's character at the beginning. You know, to make us emphatize with him and, consequently, ...

That's great! There are a few things, though... But I say I get in there some day Get back all my secrets I said I'd take to the grave Are ...

That's amazing! It is simple just like the wind, flows perfectly and is extremely real. I loved the part: Grasses wave greetings as it goes past, moving in waves of ...