Adnamarine

This has to be one of the best things I've read on YWS for a while, seriously! I am a musician, and I loved how you used the musical terms. ...

These books are brilliant! Bartimaeus is one of my favorite characters of all time! The third was definitely my favorite. In fact, I think that the book got progressively better. ...

Definately a great book. Interesting and humorous at times. I remember before I read it a long time ago, we were going on a long trip in the car and ...

Mostly I love all her books... except Rose Daughter was just STRANGE! How come you don't have Spindle's End on the list? That is a fantastic book by her. Deerskin ...

I think a bit more description could do some good. I like the rhythm. It's somehow unique, although "The world is watching you, but they will not help. They hate ...

Wow . This was really strong, beautiful imagery, really powerful. It was brilliantly bittersweet. The form, rythm, all the grammatical stuff like that was spot on, everything peachy. This was ...

This was a very sweet poem. I loved your picture with the star. I've only little things to suggest. First, I don't think that I would capitalize every line like ...

I know this is really, REALLY long, but I hope it helps!!! As I sat on the edge of my window, staring outside, watching the day pass me by. I ...

I've had that exact feeling. I post something here and people make a few comments and I look back and realize it was horrible. NOT that this was horrible! Just ...

Not bad at all. Normally I don't like couplets, but in this case it added a kind of frantic rhythm that added to the tense emotion. That was very good. ...

This was pretty good, I liked it okay. It had good emotion, good rhyme scheme and rhythm. All I have are just picky things. First you say 'some things', and ...

There's something about the way they talk about books in those books that's so... I just love it. It took me forever to come around to reading Inkheart. I kept ...

Garth Nix is brilliant. And Australian to boot. What is it about Australian's? Juliet Marillier is Australian too! I've read the first two of the Abhorsen Trilogy (I think I ...

I think you come to the conclusion too abruptly. You need more substance between the 2nd and 3rd stanzas. More metaphors, similes, etc. I think. I think the biggest problem ...

Sucky? Not in the least! The last thing I'd call myself is a poetry expert, but even I can see that it's brilliant! I'd never actually read anything of yours ...