AdmiralKat

Yesh! Yesh! KatyaElefant here to review once more! Now I get it! It's a fanfiction of Speak! Okay, let's move on Katya....Everyone gets the point... NITPICK: along side MY Hope; ...

Hello! KatyaElefant here to review! Let's see...0-) Oh my gosh! This poem is amazing. I have to say. You did a marvelous job with this poem. My favorite lines are: ...

Hello! KatyaElefant here to review! I have to say. This is an interesting format. I think this is perfect for your problem because if you wrote this in chapters, then ...

Hello! KatyaElefant here to review! I can't criticize this piece! I just can't! *sniffs* I love this piece so much. The imagery is amazing. I love these lines the most ...

Hello! KatyaElefant here to review! Let's look at this wonderful poem! NITPICK: she hated earth and (wated) to run away to the sky. Just a minor typing error. You misspelled ...

Hello! KatyaElefant here to review! I must say I love this poem! Okay criticism first. I have to or you will feel bad at the end. I feel like when ...

Hey KatyaElefant here to review! NITPICK: It just makes grave comments sound delerious! Delirious is spelled wrong here. Only nitpick that I have. Let's see. I am going to probably ...

Hello! KatyaElefant here to review! Let's see what you have done with this piece! NITPICK: I read most websites, all the way through, all of them saying the same thing. ...

Hello! KatyaElefant here to review! Just came from lunch so I am nice and charged up! I feel like in this poem, you didn't place the stanzas correctly. They don't ...

Hello! KatyaElefant here to review! I just saw some many things I had to nitpick I had to review this before review day. There goes nothing! (I'm sorry if I ...

Hello. KatyaElefant here to review! You said you wanted nitpicks. Some may be simple but you want to submit your best work. Well here you go! NITPICK 1: Also, incase ...

Hey. Katya here to review. Before I start, I have to say I really like this one. Nice job. ONLY ONE NITPICK(oh my goshhhhhhhh): He gasped for breath, as she ...

Hello! Katya here to review! I see that one thing that you have done(looked at the first one) is that you added a lot more details. NITPICKS: I was perched ...

Hello! KatyaElefant here to review! I have to say, I love this idea of a fan fiction! You have to continue! NITPICK (for spelling): No, the return address stamped on ...

Hello! Katya here to review! Let's see what you have created here.... NITPICK 1: And the start of school would be an hour earlier for other reasons.he bell always rang ...