AdmiralKat

Hello! KatyaElefant here to review! Happy Review Day. I have only one thing that I feel like could be changed but you don't have to change is the name. 13 ...

Hello! KatyaElefant here! Happy happy Review Day! Let us see what you have written... NITPICK 1: His face looked drab and sombre; it didn’t have the choleric look it usually ...

Hello! KatyaElefant here to make you a review! Oh and Happy Review Day! Let's get started shall we? NITPICK 1: Dr. Akdel kept his distance behind her, giving the Madam ...

Hello! KatyaElefant here to review! Happy Review Day! NITPICK 1: He heard a soft tinkling and turned the corner to find millions of diamonds, which he later used to create ...

Hello! KatyaElefant here to review! Happy Review Day! NITPICK 1: Chieftan Abrand rushed out of his tent in disbelief. I believe that chieftain is spelled wrong here. NITPICK 2: Slowly ...

Hello! KatyaElefant here to review! Happy Review Day as usual! One thing that just bugs me is that it is not organized. I feel like this poem should be organized ...

Hello! KatyaElefant here to review! Also, Happy Review Day! :D This poem is amazing! The only problem......it's title. It's not a letter! It's a poem. XD If it were a ...

Hello! KatyaElefant here to review! Happy Review Day! Things that need to be fixed in my opinion: First off when you say, " I am; a name on a screen ...

Hello KatyaElefant here to review! Happy Review Day! Let us see what we have here... NITPICK 1: I want to blink or shake my head but it feels like my ...

Hello! KatyaElefant here to review! Let us see what we have here! Also happy review day! Some things that I can that you can improve on is organization. Now, I ...

Hello! KatyaElefant here to review! Let's see what we have here! Let us talk about the things that I think need to be improved. I feel like the organization could ...

Hello! Katya Elefant here to review! Let me see what we have here. The thing that makes me so mad about this piece is that you didn't capitalize anything! Why ...

Hello! KatyaElefant here to review! Let's use see what we have here(some of these things are jokes so if I say something stupid, it's a joke XD). This poem could ...

Hello! KatyaElefant here to review! Let us see what you have here! NITPICK: There are set backs and obstacles, but without them you would make no true progress. Set and ...

Hello! Katya here to review! I will not be harsh about the topic and all that because I suck at that sort of thing. Well here goes! NITPICKS: I saw ...