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Re: True Love
AdjiFlex here on the big review. Works like this makes a reviewers work difficult. I really cant find much to complain about in this story. It is well written, and ...
Jul 13, 2015 -
Re: One Small Flame
AdjiFlex here for a review. Now every time I see fire I'll think of it as a living thing, probably battling its natural urge to consume. It was a very ...
Jul 10, 2015 -
Re: A Crack in the Glass - Ch1
Adjiflex here for a review/ Wow. I must say that this piece is really well-written, and I will definitely read more of it when time permits. You are quite skilled ...
Jul 10, 2015 -
Re: The Drowners -1-
AdjiFlex here for a review. Well then. It seems we have a winner here. I really don't read much outside of fantasy, but this here might just change that. I ...
Jun 11, 2015 -
Re: The Anarchy -1-
AdjiFlex here for a review. Well, quite a number of things go on in this interesting bit. I can't see just yet how the beginning of the story, before the ...
Jun 11, 2015 -
Re: Across Worlds - Chapter 38 Part 1
AdjiFlex here for a review. I think I need to start reading these chapters in order, because it seems I'm missing out on an awesome plot here. Though I didn't ...
May 31, 2015 -
Re: Across Worlds - Chapter 40 Part 2
AdjiFlex here. I don't know the background of what is going on, but I wasn't lost either. By the way, no, you don't have to name the warriors. I wasn't ...
May 31, 2015 -
Re: CID ~ Case2 : Ghosh --His murder
AdjiFlex here. Well, this is certainly... different. don't read pieces like this everyday on YWS. These cases you write could probably be a good base to a detective or mystery ...
May 31, 2015 -
Re: Facing the Flames
Well, this is an interesting bit. AdjiFlex here for a review. I liked how the story felt slightly disjointed at times. That certainly didn't take away from the suspense that ...
May 31, 2015 -
Re: OutKast: Intro
AdjiFlex here for a review. I like the idea here. Also, the piece was pretty clean in terms of grammar. There are a few errors, like sentence fragments. Take a ...
May 31, 2015 -
Re: The Death Of William Bristowe
I can't see how this doesn't already have a million likes. --AdjiFlex here for a review-- This is a stunningly vivid story that grabs the reader and binds their emotions ...
May 29, 2015 -
Re: Soul Sunder Ch.2: Village of Heros
AdjiFlex here. This is an incredible chapter! It tugs more on my emotions than the first chapter, and does a really good job at defining the triangular relationship among the ...
May 29, 2015 -
Re: Soul Sunder Ch.1: The Hybrids
AdjiFlex here! Let me see, as a lover of fantasy, I really enjoyed this chapter. Though it wasn't very long, I've experienced much of this world you have created by ...
May 28, 2015 -
Re: Deceptions
This is my first review in ages, so see with me if anything sounds a bit off or something. I quite like this piece of work. First, it does the ...
Dec 17, 2014 -
Re: Going through Time-Chapter Five: To the Big Apple
Ha. I am so bamboozled by this chapter. It is really amazing, really... odd. So these kids (somehow I believe they're kids, though it isn't made plain here) have the ...
Jul 18, 2014
