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Re: Deleted-ignore it
Thus far, I'm hooked! I love it! It's unique, WAY original, and totally captivating. I love your characters, and I think my favorite is The Pirate! :P There are only ...
Dec 8, 2009 -
Re: A howl in the darkness Chapter 2
Hey again, I'm back for another review. Hopefully I won't be too harsh. :) had gotten all over the castle Might sound better like 'had spread through the entire castle' ...
Dec 8, 2009 -
Re: Peace, Love, and California
I'm doing this as I go, so maybe I'll get more done right! :) Coming here, you had a focus, like for me it was painting and sketching, but you ...
Dec 8, 2009 -
Re: Peace, Love, and California
Hey again Carlito. Another review for you! :) Okay, here are a few things I've noticed. It was a strange feeling knowing you wouldn't be seeing any of your friends ...
Dec 8, 2009 -
Re: Children Of Mana - Ch. 1
I loved it! I only found a few mistakes, like when Marie said “But I must say you are a very weird. A very weird what? A very weird one? ...
Dec 7, 2009 -
Re: A howl in darkness (Prologue)
I liked it for the most part. In the beginning, I was really confused. I though Karishma and Nisha were humans. Then all of a sudden they were some kind ...
Dec 6, 2009 -
Re: Acrobat Team - temp title - ch.1
Brace yourself, this could take a few minutes! I'm not usually into this kind of stuff, but this one was very interesting, so I have a lot to say. Hope ...
Dec 5, 2009 -
Re: A lifeless secret - prologue
I'm very confused! To say the least, it was interesting, but I was immensely confused throughout the entire thing. You have to use slightly more common words, words normal teens ...
Dec 5, 2009 -
Re: A land away from home
Okay, it failed the first time I tried, so this will be less nit-picky, which can either be a good thing, or a bad thing. I'll sum this up in ...
Dec 3, 2009
