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  • Poetry » Mystery / Suspense, Fantasy Re: Seaworthy

    I loved this! I really enjoy old sea tales, history and pirate novels but this is my first time reading a more modern poets take on the area and I ...

    May 13, 2016
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Realistic Re: The Bittersweet Day

    Hi :) I just want to say i really love this poem. Honestly, I had to read it a couple times to feel like i completely understood it but its ...

    May 13, 2016
  • Poetry » Satire, Other Re: (don't do it)(please do it)

    wow. I am honestly so grateful that i followed a fleeting thought to a site i havent been to in a while because this was absolutely beautiful. It honestly moved ...

    May 13, 2016
  • Poetry » Humor, Humor Re: My Feet Stink

    Hey :) this won't be a huge review, because I actually love this poem. The sense of humour is ridiculous and childish in the best way possible and the poem ...

    Jun 12, 2014
  • Other » Narrative, Realistic Re: Creativity is A Huge Recycling Process

    okay, so I'm just gonna say this poem went completely over my head, and I don't really get the meaning (more my fault than yours haha). But honestly, that doesn't ...

    May 23, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Humor, Satire Re: The Adventures of Chancho and Theodore ~ chapter one

    I love the new beginning :). everything fits together a lot nicer and your writing style can shine through now that you're using clear techniques. I found myself laughing at ...

    May 19, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Mystery / Suspense, Teen Fiction Re: The Other Side Chapter 1

    I like the concept, and I definitely want to see where this is going. I feel like this is a good start to something that could be really interesting if ...

    May 19, 2014
  • Poetry » General, Dramatic Re: Make-Believe

    I love this. It's so subtle, yet powerful because it grips you in and you can't help but relate. The last line is especially affective, like the last punch in ...

    May 19, 2014
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: At least I survived

    I love the universal message of the poem and how you were able to make it so clear and simple, but loaded with meaning. I love the concept of looking ...

    May 18, 2014


This planet has - or rather had - a problem, which was this: most of the people living on it were unhappy for pretty much all of the time. Many solutions were suggested for this problem, but most of these were largely concerned with the movement of small green pieces of paper, which was odd because on the whole it wasn't the small green pieces of paper that were unhappy.
— Douglas Adams, The Hitchhiker's Guide to the Galaxy