AdamBH

I look at the small child before me, dead before his time had come. He looks up at me, “What happened?” “You died.” I answer calmly. His brown eyes fill ...

So that’s a yes indefinitely A heartbeat, make it one, two and three You closed tired eyes And open them to my own uncertainty I love this stanza, it throws ...

Thinking knowledge it's a good thing is right, thinking you know more than anyone it's wrong, I say this because poor me 'Poor' seems to undermine the tone of the ...

I don't understand exactly what this poem is about. Is he gay, and that upsets you because you love him? I did like the anger, and the conflics again I ...

I loved this. It's full of contradictions, which I think a lot of people can get confused about, but I believe contradictions mean just as much as things that make ...

I like this! I think it's like a new take on romance and I absolutely relate to the way she thinks and the Paris... ahhh XD. It's kind of like ...

I'll say what I say really often: more imagery and figurative language. However, I will also say wow! You captured something I really feel, especially recently. I am never the ...

Wow, I really loved this one! I think you could have perhaps included a bit more imagery or rhythm to make it more poemy, but you know what, sod that! ...

Hi, I liked it overall, but I thought the emotions could have been stronger. How? Make it much, much slower; and describe more in detail. You could also use some ...

I thought it was a sweet poem but I thought it was rather spelled out and simple. You could have made it more complex in terms of imagery and figurative ...

I agree with the previous reviwer. I liked it a lot :D Also, remove the s in 'sees'. The subject is 'they' so you don't need to add an s ...

Oh my God! I have just posted a poem called 'just hope' and it appeared first on the list of zero comments, and your appeared second, and I think they ...

I agree with Warrior Princess, except that she thought of a lot more to say about it than I did! The only things I have to say is that the ...

I thought it was lovely and very clever. Loved the extended metaphor. One suggestion is that the line 'like a picture in the sand' sounds a little akward for some ...

People usually drink wine with meals, Rosé, white or red regardless, I take a swig of poison, but don't take salt, but arsanic. I love this bit, it's like harm ...