AdaAshland

yeah it is

thank you, i think i'll make those fixes so it can read better

thank you so much for the review, this one was of my own memories so the line about scars and how not creatures are kind is there because i got ...

thank you, there person is my nonna and she just got super sick. i wrote a version of this when it happened a few years ago.

tysm!!

thank you. that means a lot

here's a quick review(i can't write very much so it might not count as a review) i loved the imagery and concept, but i found it a little confusing to ...

hi i really liked the poem, and the descriptions were amazing, i just feel like the ending was a bit abrupt, and didn't feel fully resolved. overall, great poem

this is really great for a first poem and i love your style of writing!