Absynthe

OOOHH keep writing please!! when i have to stop reading ur story its like pauseing a good movie!!! ok i think that you should try describing feelings more often, but ...

Hey! thanks all, i was just bored out of my mind so i didnt really get far on this. To tell you the truth, im procrastonating on the story ive ...

hrmmm i'm not quite sure what to say about this. because this is clearly a spinoff from lord of the rings and i am not sure if you were trying ...

lol dude this gets extremely monotonous. lol but i like how u put in tht surprise ending, and it reminds me of office space ^^

LOL at first its emo then it turns tree-hugger.... I LOVE IT!!! :smt081

:!: TO ALL PEOPLE WHO HAVE POSTED ON THIS PLEASE READ!!!! :!: What makes these tears so special? Do they make my wishes come true? Seriously, you do not need ...

Thanks for reading Perra!!! I really apreciate it!!! I'll definantly will check out the fan group. And thank u liza, thts very flattering ^^. I TOLD YOU MY TORTURE SCENE ...

Wtf??? i have absolutely NO clue wht ur talking about :smt064

it was a god idea but really sketchy, i kinda got lost. try to use more details and word it differently. i would head back to the drawing board and ...

Hey thanks Geneeves!!! Lol i'm glad u liked it. Sorry about the words that say 't't after it, idk what happened. Lol if u were wondering, it will make sense ...

This was cool. I have a bad habbit of thinking and immagineing parts, like what would charlie think if he found out that edward was a vampire, and such. this ...

is the caracter a girl or a boy??? just a side note.

LOL this is confuseing, but COOL!! lol vampires must be a popular topic. im writeing a vampire story too. Yours really paintts a picture in your head.

I thought that that was cool. Try to keep it shorter, though. I really like it!!! keep it up! this is really good story material!

Hey, this was cute. its REALLY confuseing.....and short. kkeep working on it, but be more descriptive