AardvarkSlave

First, I'd like to start off by saying this made me tear up. Second, I want to say that I haven't read any critiques on this, but if you get ...

Hey. I just want to get the basics out of the way first. I was a bit iffy about your writing style at first, but then I got used to ...

Hmm, I would have enjoyed it more if you had put a little more description into maybe the setting, emotions... Anything along those lines. If you had intentionally made it ...

I have to admit, the thing that made me click on the link to this story was because of the name, "Jubilee." It's my middle name. I'm glad I clicked ...

I thought this was a great piece. I loved the topic, since most people are afraid to write about something such as this. You, though- You were bold enough to ...

You know what song goes well when reading this? Waltz For Venus Moving on... I liked this piece. It didn't drawl on and on with pointless details; I think you ...

I liked the transition of her opinions and the realism. I would immediately hate my classroom if I had to go back, too... All in all, I think its a ...

I thought this was a touching piece and I definitely felt sympathy. The stanzas, though... Sometimes, I feel they are misplaced. I know, multiple stanzas can form one sentence, but ...

Yet, I still wanted to be your only girl. This comes from the fourth paragraph, and the last line. Now, the next paragraph has basically summed up Stella's feelings on ...