AWritersFantasy

-Bounces- I can't wait to read more of this. Although I'd like to read more of Flames, too. :D I liked this a lot. Sorry if this isn't super helpful. ...

Another awesome chapter. As far as the vocabulary goes, I didn't notice anything major. o.O I also didn't notice any lack of description in any specific places. Characters: I like ...

“Of course,” Creiha responded with a sigh, “but who do they speak to?” “I’m sure Strick would know!” Markus blurted, leaning against a tree and grinning. Strick whirled around in ...

I really liked this chapter and am curious as to who Arillo is. However, I'm confused about one thing. Before Creiha collapsed or whatever in the first scene, she was ...

I'm not going to point out anything else that's all ready been said, other than that YAY! I finally got to read this! I've been trying for months. o__o I ...

I'm a little confused. I do like the beginning paragraph...but I'm a bit confused about these characters. How old are they supposed to be? Perhaps if you described what they ...

I watched the movie before reading the book...I bought the book but haven't finished reading it. I enjoyed the movie enough to buy the book because I'm curious and ask ...

I only read a little bit of it, but I loved the description. There were a few spelling/grammar type mistakes, but those are fixable. I did like what I read, ...

This was a very good start. I might be repeating some things all ready pointed out, so bear with me. There were a few grammar here and there, but it ...