AWritersFantasy

A lot of this is probably stuff that's already been said, but I'm saying it for just in case. Over all, this story is very interesting. I think one of ...

I'm only going to critique about half of this, since it's rather...long (mainly due to the lack of spacing between sentences), and I don't really have the attention spam at ...

Over all I did like this. I was a little confused with the transitions in the was kinda hard to tell what was happening, just because things seemed to happen ...

First, I enjoyed the description you used in this. Good job. Secondly, there were only two things I felt the need to point out, which were changing a period to ...

I really, really liked this. It drew me in, and I loved the description of everything. There was just the right amount of it, too. Good job! (Sorry for the ...

Anything in bold/italics is either a note from myself or just a note as far as grammar/spelling/capitalization goes. Anything that has a strike out through it just means that it ...

-Squee- I LOVE it! Thank you SO much for making this for me. I can't wait to listen to all of the songs. ^_____^ Edit: is there a reason some ...

The Fivefold Road Prologue, Roedra cast a glance behind her, steel grey eyes flickering over the men that trailed her. They were sullen, dull eyed, taciturn and travel worn. She ...

[pre] The Kingdom of Adonia Chapter 1: "Magdelus , bring my son forward" called King Acrisus. Magdelus, King Acrisus’s loyal follower and Sir Rose's guardian (King Acrisus' son), went forward ...

This was seriously one of two books I had to read for school my sophomore year of high school that I not only loved, but I actually read ahead for ...

I haven't -read- it, but it was the very first play I was in when I was in high school. We performed it my freshman year. Granted, I was just ...

I agree with the above, but I also have to admit that the way it is, with so little information, kind of intrigues me and makes me want to keep ...

AWritersFantasy > I could you know discuss making a mix for Archer's Legend with you, if you want. -SQUEE- I would worship you FOREVER if you did that for me. ...

First, your formatting is making the post kind of huge, but that's not a huge issue. o.O By all laws of the human mind they should have had me completely ...

Ha, I thought I had finished reading the last part of this chapter. Guess not. I only have a few things to point out, though they're not really anything with ...