AUnicornNamedJay

Hello June, it's me Jay. Thanks for what you said, I know it sounded a bit choppy and rushed, but thanks for the advise on how to improve on embellishing ...

Finally. I love you just so you know that! :D Lol I always wanted someone to really go in depth about what it is that I needed to get fixed ...

Lol. Thanks for the review, I will take what you said and try to apply it to another poem I'm working on. Lol. Yeah, I can see where things can ...

THANKS! :D Glad your read it and loved it! Thanks again! :D And don't worry you've said enough. :D Kk bye!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! -Jay.xoxo.

I will re-read it and look for the errors and well thanks. :) Kk Byeee love! :) Don't forget to smile, it keeps the demons away! :) p.s. goodnight! :D ...

Thanks Love! Well since you enjoyed this one, I would recommend you read my other ones, I've written about 6 now short-stories and each are dramatic. I think you'll like ...

Well darling, I would love it if you would finish reading and give me feedback so that way I know what to fix. Thanks darling and thanks for letting me ...

Hola! :D Thanks for reviewing/commenting my darling, lol, I really like the fact that you took my advise and read one of my older stories. Hehehe! Now if you really ...

No, honestly... YOU'RE AMAZING! :D Lol I will carry on writing. Thanks for telling me to do so! :) Don't forget to smile love, it keeps the demons away! K! ...

Stay strong, and please don't cry. I'd hate to know I made someone cry! Lol. Just out of curiosity, when reading this what did you think about, was it something ...

Lol. You are amazing. Yeah, I wanted to try and create a new rhyme scheme and well I think it worked quiet well, but there are some places where I'm ...

Yea, I didn't give a lot to go off of to like make this conversation between the two more dramatic and more informational to the situation, but I guess it ...

Hahaha! Oh, no It was for the role of a girl, but then I decided to change it and try something new, because I've never really written something other then ...

Fantastic love! :) I can't wait until it is finished! Kk ByE! :D Smile, it keeps the banana ninjas and the demons away. :) -Jay.xoxo.

Thanks! :D Lol yeah I was so close to crying when writing this passage, Lol. I loved this one because I wanted it to see as though he was ready ...