ATragicLoveStory

Alright. Here's the scoop. My first reactiton to your poem was probably not the response you want your reader to think. As I read farther in your poem, my first ...

Aww, thanks, Juan. I love you. :D Now time for the critique: Edited: When all hope is gone, I'll come! When your heart is in two, I'll come! When you ...

Wow, I really loved this piece. It had so much description and I think I understand why she killed herself and himself. It seemed as if you gave off the ...

Alright. First off, this poem sort of confused me. Does the guy mean that she has a crush on HIM or another guy? Maybe I just misunderstood. Second off, I ...

Tina, This story made me laugh. I can totally picture myself doing the same thing as Autumn. There was no punctuation or spelling mistakes that I noticed, although I didn't ...

First off, punctuation and spelling: I stood beneath the shower head and let the hot water wash away the stresses of the past two hours, condensing it into a steam ...

What to say...Well, Rieda and kitty15 basically mentioned all the BAD points of your poem, so I'll point out the good points. I'll give you points for using emotion in ...

Juan, Aw. It seems as if you put your whole heart into it. It's so beautiful. Thanks! ^_^ This poem has so much imagery in it, it's amazing. Obviously, your ...

This was so adorable. It interested me. I hope my first kiss will be like that that. ^_^ The only "problem" that I have with it, is the quote "Why ...

Daniel, Alainna and Andy had pretty much said everything I was going to point out. I'm not that big into fantasy either, yet it sort of caught my attention. I ...

hmm...I enjoyed it. Very good description. Too bad that I didn't even know there was such an animal out there named an Osprey. I guess you learn a new thing ...