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Hey Sol. This piece was everything and more amazing. I'm a christian too, and i've only had one instance like this that can even compare to that. When I read ...

hello there :) you had a lot of great parts in here and this one has to be my favorite: I want to breathe fresh air, Step on ground that ...

Hello :) this was all interesting. I have never seen six word stories, so this was an interesting read for me. Its cool because you just let the unsaid words ...

Hello there! :) Great read so far. Nit pick time ! When someone dies , they check in on my list. At the end of the week Hermes , has ...

Hello there :) great read. You let the emotions kick in by themselves. You used fragments alot and that kind of bugged me, but the way in which you used ...

Great read. :) You made it very fluent and very touching. This is the kind of thing that happens to only a few people; that life changing perspective. This is ...

Hello there! great piece! :) You fluency was great but in some places a little jumbled up; only a little. You had a great, strong voice in this, and i ...

Hello there. I'm going to assume the m.c. is a girl? I didn't find any parts where there could be nitpicks. :) You should probably give the main character a ...

Hello there :) This was really a cute story. Sad, though, but adorable. I love how you made the guy her key to moving on; there's true love! I do ...

Hello there :) I've got to say, in 100 words, this made an impact. I've been there, done that, and this made me think of that one time. When you ...

hello there :) Great piece. I'm going to do a few nitpicks, then the overall impression Trying to take the pressure of wishing it was someone else instead. no "h" ...

Simply. Amazing. You put in a different picture in my head with each paragraph, and you were very descriptive in not-so-descriptive words. Finally, once you’ve taken all I have left ...

hello there :) i thought this was pretty good. You have it all well thought out, and it seems like a great story line. You should probably clear up the ...

hello there :) just a few nitpicks I was happy to hear my own voice instead of her squeaky voice. An "a" instead of two "e"'s in squeaky. "Oh , ...

Hello there. :) I've got to say, this puts an entirely new perspective on things. A few nitpicks then I'll get on with it.. So , what if a bunch ...