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"I’m not a parent, but then I think this could speak to you and me too." This speaks very loudly. Your short poem brings to light a very dangerous subject ...

Well, first off, it's all one run on sentence, with no punctuation at all. If you meant for it to be this way, then it can make sense in some ...

This was very interesting. The concept was intriguing, and there was a lot of strings left unattached, and a lot of questions left without answers, so it gripped me and ...

When I read this through the first time, I noticed one point that I didn't quite agree with, "When will we spread the message That there is hope out there?" ...

This is an awesome poem! I have always loved whimsical things, and this surely fits the bill well. You do a great job of taking something we take for granted ...

This would go great as a modern-rap/rock song, with a fast pace and some pump up hammer chords to get your blood moving. The premise of the lyrics isn't anything ...

Wow, this is a great poem. I don't always like things (as in push the like button,) mostly because I'm sarcastic, critical of everything, and a hard A, but this ...

Wow, creepy and beautiful at the same time. Very inventive. The story is the absolute definition of original, and even classic in its makeup. You have a great writing style ...

Lol, the last line makes it all worth it. I love sarcasm, and I live it when it gets deep, and this is definitely one of those times. "Sit down ...

This is a great article. First of, you do a great job of keeping it in essay form, as most good articles should be. This gives us the information we ...

Very good lyrics. I can definitely picture this in a song, and almost found myself singing it (much to the un-enjoyment of my family.) "Did I even do enough? Was ...

How sad :( The story is short, and it's a long, run on paragraph, but other than that, you definitely get your point across. You use a lot of very ...

Better than the first part of the story, but in a different way. I like that the attitude of the short changes, almost instantly, which makes it interesting. The first ...

Very fun story. I know you say that Such is a dog at the end of the story, but he seemed so much like a person at the beginning of ...

Wow, very, very incite-full. You use a good combination of descriptive words to really bring out the scene and give it some depth. I like that it has a story ...