AEChronicle

This is a good poem. You use some very descriptive language that really paints some cool images in my mind. "a word with a molten gold interior, the dregs of ...

I love ballads, and I love short ones! This is a great combination of both, and sticks to that old style that has been so popular through the ages. Yet, ...

This is very interesting. I love the ideas and the questions you bring to mind. The poem has depth to it, and there is a lot of truth in its ...

I like this poem a lot. You use some very good descriptions, "Perhaps ambition is all we need. Because when hidden away in the swollen womb swimming through an ignorant ...

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Well, this is definitely high on the interesting scale. The subject matter is very thought provoking. But this is not a poem. There's no rhyme or reason, no flow, it's ...

This is great. I love the simplicity of haiku's, and how, when written well, convey a lot of information in their short lines. This one is great, and I couldn't ...

Man, this is creepy. Makes me not want to go play games in the woods after dark with a group anymore. Like you Tiburon chapters, the writing is great. It ...

Once again, awesome! I loved the story and everything about it. I like that it's about the kids, but, so far, it's not like all the adults are idiots, which ...

This story is awesome! It reminds me of one of those Goosebumps books that I read when I was younger, and it's even starting to sound like one. Your writing ...

Just finished with this third installment, which is actually the fourth that I read. Very good and interesting. I'll get my one nitpick out of the way first, “Have you ...

Poor Andy. It's sad that there are actually people like this in the world, and that they feel they have to do such crazy things in order to let the ...

This is so sad, especially since you say it applies to you in real life. But speaking about it as a poem, I like the lines, "Its happened, I lost ...

The first thing I noticed is this, “Yes,” I say. “This is going to be a great day. The day that we fight the Persians. Finally.” This is great! Your ...

I like this first installment much better than the fourth, no offense. You do a great job with Pheidippides explanations, and the banter between the Generals about what action to ...