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I love your descriptive style! The poem is unique and lovely all together. It's beautiful. Keep it up.

Awww, this poem is awfully sweet. I love poems like these. Sweet and simple. The vocabulary is easy to understand, which is alright, but changing the words a bit can ...

I really liked this poem. I'm glad you changed the last lines. That was my favorite. Overall, your writing has potential. Be sure to write more lovely poems as this.

Actually, I intended for it to be "the person" because I didn't want to disclose the gender. Feeling her heartbeat is something of her habit, there is a story behind ...

Thank you for your criticism. I have tweaked it a bit after you pointed it out. The spacing was totally surprising, since I copied it from Microsoft Word, I thought ...

So far, this is very interesting. I'll be reading more of this as soon as I can. Keep up the good work.

Very creative. I love the first stanza the most. If I were a pessimist, I would agree with your views on the poem. But this is good reading fun.

I love this. :) I particularly love the third stanza. I'm not a fan of poems, but this is one I will remember. Great work!

You described anger really well. All of the mistakes are already pointed out. Over all, it's really cool. I love how you made it sweet and simple and yet described ...

Very nice! Especially about the baby! I would really like to listen to it as a song. Good job.

Thank you! :) I would make it longer, but I didn't know how.

Thank you for taking the time to review this! Ellie's age is about 16, bordering 17, but she is very immature. And what do you mean by British Slang? Could ...

Nice! Very well thought and creative. I love the last lines. I'll be looking forward for more of your work!