ADream

This is really nice. I loved it from beginning to the end. It's the kind of imaginary feel that I really like, something magical in everyday life. "The candle is ...

Hello! :) The poem is beautiful. I love the beginning. Although the ending is really cheesy, (don't mind it. I've written cheesier stories) the poem is sweet. You wouldn't have ...

I really like this poem, though I agree with the others. The sentence structure is a bit strange. But I know how hard it is to write a rhyming poem. ...

Hello. I love this story. I'm kind of saddened that she killed herself (or maybe not, it just says everything went black). But it is really good. I love her ...

Hi, I like the story so far. I know that this is set in 1700s but somehow, when I read it, it doesn't sound like something out of 1700s. Maybe ...

I love these kinds of stories, full of historical facts and such. I've tried my hand at it once, but I gave up halfway because I couldn't get much research ...

This is a nice beginning to a story, especially the first paragraph. There are a few things muddling me, but that makes me want to read more. I'm not much ...

This is a creative piece of work. I love your descriptive style, because it reminded me so much of my own writing style. Although I've tweaked and changed it a ...