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Hello, I'm going to leave a short little suggestion, as it looks like this is fairly good on it's own! Good job editing. Alright at the end of this paragraph... ...

I love this! The writing is well done, it looks like you took the time to go through and edit it as well. Good job! There's several directions this could ...

Hello again :D I'm going to suggest edits just like before! I hope they help! He had, originally been a devout man of god, but after working here (this word ...

Amazing descriptions!!! I have some edits in mind that I feel would improve the piece even more! my cheeks barring my true face, exposing my flaws. my cheeks (baring) is ...

I don't see what editing you want done, it is fairly hard to edit someone else's poem, as they do not have the vision you had when you wrote it. ...

I like this!!! It's written well, however one piece of advice I would give is to go over it and edit it with tenses in mind. Example 1 - When ...

I think this is great! It really expresses how you feel without getting hung up on 'being a poem' it simply is. I know a lot of people shy away ...

Alright! First of all, well done. I have a few edits that i think would make it read better. () I'll put these right after an edit I want to ...