787ellen

this was a very ammeture piece of work so i wont bother to reupload but please read my other works!

thanks for the review, you were very helpful!

thanks, i'll work on thows points

thanks for your review, the idea was sap though so maybe its just not your cup of tea. this wasnt the best part of my novel to post as the ...

I found one mistake, but other than that it's a realy good piece. I often think what if it was someone else? And you've put it into words. wel done!

this diddn't upload properly, i'm so upset. I'll upload the other half when I have the points

this is really good and emotional, i like your point of reality that some people just don't give a damn. Freinds and family were lost that day and it should ...

It's cute, I think this because we all ( as girls or boys) think of our perfect love in our heads, heck some of us even dream of them and ...

this is really great! this hero sounds quite mystirious . you don't give much away about him but thats good.

this is really good. fan fiction sometimes doesnt make sense but this does.

this is really brilliant ! Believe it or not things like that really do happen. I love to see the length this will go.

thanks for all the comments, this will really help my writing

thanks, i know its fast but it will all become clear. they have a past just wait and see. thabks for spotting the grammar sometimes i wright to fast to ...

its a good story line, you should write more

I really like it, alot of relationships are hard or broken and I think you captured it beautifully