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oh whoops the glass thing was just me not being able to read lmao. Gas makes more sense. And np

Thank you so much! I'm going to rework that stanza hopefully

thank you!

Ahhh thank you! I'm terrible with commas aha so thank you for pointing out where I don't need them

Thank you so much! And I will take into consideration what you have mentioned!

Thank you so much !

Thank you so much! With the comma thing, I kind of intended it to be that way to show it was all said quickly without pauses? I can see where ...

Thank you so much! With the comma thing, I kind of intended it to be that way to show it was all said quickly without pauses? I can see where ...

In England, it's spelled favourite :-) And I meant operating theatres, which are real things! I promise! I'm pretty sure you can choose to go by Ms. as well; it's ...

Thank you for pointing out my grammatical errors! It's really helpful, as I'm a terrible proof reader when it comes to my own writing. Thank you for taking the time ...

This is actually very annoying. I would prefer an actual review, please don't comment this again

Thank you so much for the review!

Thank you for the review! With the maroon, i just meant my school jumper was now maroon, so not that clever. I see what you mean about impact and I ...

No problem :-)

Thank you for the review! I never thought about an intercom and that's actually such a good idea!