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Honestly, I couldn't find any rhyme for that verse and it bugged me so much too

Honestly, I couldn't find any rhyme for that verse and it bugged me so much too

Thank you so much! It means a lot!

Thank you so much!

Thanks for the review :-) As for the meter thing, I actually just wrote it so every line had 8 syllables and didn't really think about a meter. I just ...

thanks for the advice, I've never been the best poetry writer so I've always just stuck with rhyme but I'll have a go at what you suggested! I guess the ...

thank you so much!

I'll be looking forward to reading more as I genuinely really enjoyed it!

I'll be looking forward to reading more as I genuinely really enjoyed it!

:-D Thank you so much

I actually didn't capitalise anything on purpose, as it's part of the structure of the poem, as is the reason it's all in one line. But thank you for the ...

Thank you so much! It really means a lot :-)

ahh thank you! It seems like everyone is confused about that 4th line but I promise that it does make sense, I explained it in the review below aha but ...

ahh thank you!

Thank you so much! And I completely get what you mean about people wanting to get out just disappearing..