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The thing about not being arrested was because this is from her point of view and she's an unreliable narrator. She doesn't explain what happens, as although it's insinuated she ...

Thank you :-)

Oh damn yeah, that [quote] isn't meant to be there and there was another few lines explaining what I liked that seem to have disappeared!

Thank you, again! It means a lot

Thank you so much for the review, and thank you for spotting my typo XD

I know how you feel, I always end up in a situation like that whilst writing poetry.

Ooh I'd love to hear it! I've never actually written something with another person before so it could be a new experience for me lol

I always do the opposite lol! I tend to skip dialogue and go straight to the description aha, I feel like we'd make a great writing team :-)

thank you so much again, because reading this I felt like I completely over-reacted at the last review. I'm kind of not having a great time lately and just needed ...

Thank you so much! I'll try add in some more of her personality when I go back to edit :-)

Honestly no I've had time to think about it, I'm just being stupid. I asked for a review and that's what I got! If I were to actually try get ...

Thank you lol. I'm thinking that basically I am going to just write the whole story, go through and SEVERELY edit it and then re-upload it onto here when I'm ...

Thank you so much :-) This honestly made me smile, you're so sweet!

Oh also, as you said you didn't particularly want to read on, don't feel obliged to review any more. I don't want to force you to read something you obviously ...

Oh also, as you said you didn't particularly want to read on, don't feel obliged to review any more. I don't want to force you to read something you obviously ...