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thank you so much for the review! and thank you for the feedback, it really helps :)

thank you so much for your review! i really appreciate it!

Thank you for the review! This was written as an exercise in class so i didn't give much focus to the plot just the dialogue, but i wish i had ...

thank you so much!

Thank you so much for the review! It means a lot

thank you so much for the review! and that you so much for spotting all my little errors etc, makes editing much easier!

thank you for the review! i think where i said teacher, i meant 'creature' whoops!

Thank you so much! it means so so much

thank you so much! it wasn't about a specific character but i wrote it around the same time i wrote a short story about domestic abuse so that was the ...

thank you so much!! it means so much to me that people enjoy my work!

thank you so much for the review! it really means a lot!!

Thank you so much! It really means a lot!

and how the colours mention after that line, are colours of bruises!

Thank you! It means a lot (I am in a lesson right now lmao) You are completely right about the bru(fl)i(es)ses by line! I'm glad you picked up on that.

thank you so much! I'm an A-Level student too (year 13 oof) and i get sooo distracted in my online lectures!