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Thank you for the review! I think you actually have a point with Lottie having other patients to attend to. Maybe I should have either had a second nurse she ...

Thank you for your review! I definitely plan on revising it and adding more parts in the future, if not turning it into a novella or novel! Your feedback really ...

there's genuinely so much that sucks about this part ughhhh. This came from an assignment that had a 7,500 word limit and of course i picked a story that i ...

Thank you for your kind review! There are seven chapters previous to this one if you are ever interested to read more

you're very right about the scene where she's being experimented on. I'll be honest and say that when writing it, i knew she needed to pretend to be asleep after ...

i think you're right, but they're still fun movies. The animatronics were awesome and i loveee mike XD

omg i sent this before i was finished writing because i was scared the time was gonna be up, i'll finish it off tomorrow

i definitely will keep posting this! But there are only 4 parts at the moment (i had a strict word count and it was for an assignment!) so i am ...

thank you for the review! you bringing up some great points that i need to work on, i think some of these i got carried away trying to write something ...

I think for the thing about the hospital; in the second chapter Lottie explains that patients were moved around to make room for the infected / adults with the parasite. ...

ah thank you for clarifying! I shall definitely start from wing 1 and work my way through, then maybe I can give a review that makes a bit more sense ...

I’m going to properly respond and make some notes from you feedback after work, but damn you should consider being a real editor! You’re picking up on stuff that my ...

thank you for your review tikaya! i'm so happy you are enjoying it. I love your views on ravi, it's so nice to see other opinions on him because I ...

thank you for the review! A good point about the wheelchair - i need to find a better way to describe her learning how to use it! And I agree, ...

thank you so much for your kind review! I agree that some scenes need more room to breathe with the worldbuilding and character development. I think my editing really needs ...