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Oo please do!!

also, don't restrict yourself to a word count if you don't need to! I find it can dampen big ideas if it's not a short story. If it's a WIP ...

i think that would really help it! But for a first draft, it definitely lays all the groundwork. I am on 70k of my novel, and have to finish it ...

You really nailed it with your interpretation! And your feedback is incredibly helpful :) I think with the title, I wasn’t sure what to call it so I settled on ...

for being written in 48 hours, it's definitely great!

i presssed send too early and had to edit that oops

OKAY FINALLY REPSONDING SORRYYY IT should be Mayflower Park with a capital, you are correct! Your ship idea is very cool, though at this stage i don't think there are ...

ALSO YES HE'S VERY INSPIRED BY SPIKE I LOVE SPIKE!! I even had a character in an old abandoned novel of mine who becomes a vampire and called himself Spikey ...

tysm for your review!! I think you are right about needing a beat between the shooting and the meeting i work on an industrial estate, and we have a Greggs! ...

does it change to that when you edit this draft? It's probably just a typo and you can edit it out.

Thanks, but I'm not sure you should have marked this as a review, maybe just a comment? Because it's taken it out the greenroom, others who would leave real reviews ...

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Hi! Hope you are doing well today/tonight/whatever time it is for you! This poem reads to me like an accusation aimed at a god, or some sort of chosen one, ...

I’m glad!! I do really love your writing and the sort of stories you tell. Very realistic and gritty.

Omg I am going to fire my editor (grammarly) Because boor shur instead of door shut is so embarrassing and I just went and checked my document and GRAMMARLY HADNT ...

I think with the door what I meant was it was better to pick the lock quietly than just kick it open as boys might usually have done but I ...