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oo okay that makes sense! I was taking it too literal i think, and thinking, can liquor actually rot?? but that is a very nice line now i know the ...

@AlexWrites sorry for some reason it didn't tag you in the review so hopefully this works

“Spoons” is slang for “Wetherspoons” which is a chain pub/bar in the UK that almost every town has, so you're not missing out on a trend there haha I guess ...

i get your sentiment completely, but there definitely are aspects of the craft you can teach! I dislike that particular teacher's advice but I did it to get his good ...

im glad you didn't feel i was too harsh!! I think honestly it's just that middle section really, the first and last 3rd are really solid pacing wise. Not gonna ...

haha damn i didn't even realise, i just picked out what I thought felt most important XD I am glad you liked my 8-ball description, since I was pretty proud ...

thank you for the review!! It means a lot

Awwww! Wait was this before or after the Invasion; I feel it is a little unclear… I thought this was funny because when I was editing i reread some old ...

thank you so much for the review!

Don’t worry about it though! It didn’t detract from my enjoyment of the piece :)

Hi dom! Sorry I haven’t replied to the message on my wall; wanted to give a thought out answer! I will get back to that later. I totally think you’re ...

updated!

OH TYSM FOR REMINDING ME AGAIN ; gonna write some new ones later ill just remove them for now

Hmmm from last chapter, I thought Clem’s ppl were already doing the breaking and entering while they were still at the docks? But this narration made it seem as if ...

you have to put the entire word 'quote' in the brackets and it should work! hi