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aa that would make more sense!

thank you so much for the kind review! I think you are right; the "it's dwynwen who is burnt" definitely doesn't flow as well. I shall have to have a ...

thank you for your review!

In traditional Welsh folklore, Dwynwen is the patron saint of all lovers. She wanted to marry her love, Maelon, but her dad, Brychan, didn't like the look of him and ...

Good luck with the finals!!

tysm for the review! I think you're very right about the opening summary. I was trying a bit hard to work on Rev's voice/tone and didn't intersperse it with enough ...

Hmm yes i definitely need to write in more about he escaped! The chapter ended up much longer than I thought than when I went back to edit I just ...

I know this isn't perfect, but hoping you like what I've done with Rev and introducing him to two personal faves!

Oo that sounds like a great idea!

Thank you for your review, Alice!

Honestly, the whole sequence was fun but HARD to write. I knew the crawler had to escape outside (for a later plot point), but figuring out how was so hard. ...

tysm for picking up on that editing error. I went to fix it and i've said 'Lola snapped' way too many times XD The encounter happened in what is kind ...

thank you for the review! I don't really know why I dislike this chapter. I think i was unsure how to bridge between katie's death and lola dealing with the ...

you should definitely consider writing a full-length novel about this! it's an awesome concept

Ugh yeah you’re so right about this chapter. A lot is missing and it doesn’t feel like it makes total sense. I think in my rewrite I’ll have an entire ...