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Hey Rose! I liked the gneral idea of this poem. but I don't like the way you present it. What I mean is, I don't like your voice. You sound ...

Hey Kafka, I'm here as requested. Thanks for asking me to review this, I like it a lot. Honestly, it's hard to believe that a writer as talented as yourself ...

Hey Smile, I'm here as requested. Thanks for asking me to review this. I like the fact that you have the power over your readers in hte sense that short, ...

Wow. I'm here as requested, and thank you for asking me to review this phonomenal piece. It is truly origional, gory, romantic, and unexplainably vivid. Throughout the story you maintained ...

Hey Kiicoh, I'm here as requested. First of all, let me say that this was astounding. Your word choice was excellent, and the idea of a 'progression' was really there, ...

Hey Shiney, I really liked this. It was a very clever poem, and some little words and phrases that you use really made it great. "Necktie" and "pores and craters ...

Hey PoeticGlow, I agree with Jagged and Sarebear that the rhyming was a little awkward. I think that when you write a poem that you want to rhyme in, you ...

Hey Penguin, Your poem is really interesting. I like the flow that you present in this poem, and the length is perfect. Perhaps I am not reading into this poem ...

Hey Tinkembell! Is this your entire prolouge? I agree with Skins that there's nothing particular about this that makes me want to read on, however I like the concept by ...

Hey Kat, You might just be my favorite poet on YWS. No joke. I really don't have any criticizm for you, this is just brilliant. I mean, only a protegy ...

Hey Jasmine, I'm here as requested! I like your story, and I like your characters so far. This is definately something that I would want to continue reading. Here's just ...

Hey Sarebear, I'm here as requested. I absolutely love this. I know you are asking your readers to tear this to pieces, but I don't think I can do that. ...

Hey Megs, I'm here as requested! I like your description in a lot of places in this chapter. One thing I really liked is how you described the silence by ...

Hey Amie, Here I am for the second chapter. I have to say, the Prolouge was much better than Chapter One. Maybe because of how unique the bridge thing was, ...

Hey Amie, I'm here as requested, thank you for asking me to review this! I really love it. This is such a unique story, and it really makes me want ...