3-Damentional

I have to say that it's nice to see a poem that is positive instead of gloomy like most of the stuff on this site. The "But not here" repetition ...

The only advise I can give you is to cut down on the unnecessary details and do more to advance the plot. I like the ambiance and mood of the ...

You obviously didn't read the introductory note. Either that or you didn't understand it. This is a piece of satire. Of course Rap is not the cause of these things. ...

I have to say that it is a bit confusing. Where did the girl come from and what was he supposed to be doing in the shadows? Other than those ...

Honestly, I'm not going apologize for the poem. I believe that we are all entitled to our own form of self expression. If you didn't like it that much, you ...

This is awesome. When I saw the length of the piece I thought I wasn't going to read the whole thing but it trapped me. I could'nt look away. I ...

Wow... all of these compliments and insults for the same piece of work. Interesting...

I think the rhythym was perfect. It made me think about the old lady in the shoe. If the Man was replaced by a child or something, I would have ...

This is good 'cause I normally don't get other people's poetry. It wold've been a whole lot less understandable w/o the background but I get it. Good stuff.

It was a good piece of work, I'll give you that much. I think that you could've been more creative with it though. The constant references to the sun showed ...

It was kind of difficult to understand the first time but after I reread it, I understood colpletely. You did this one right because I felt the speaker's pain through ...

I understand where you are coming from but it was written like spoken word. The "Do" you reffered to was deliberate but the missing "s" on word was not. If ...

I liked it. People need to realize that poems aren't perfect by the time you realize that there's nothing more you can do with it. I actually read he whole ...