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I don't think the last two comments do this poem justice! I thought this was excellent! I have no critiques but I loved it and thought it was magical and ...

Excellent piece! I'm hooked! My only suggestion (besides what Brad pointed out) is this quote here. "How did Jenna know all this? Because she was wise." Although we do need ...

Face to the sky He inhales a final breath Then, he tumbled from the bridge Ready to accept his death Face to the sky He lets out his last breath ...

Absolutely wonderful. It's a little heart-breaking, only because I'm feeling that right now. Its completely fantastic and your wording was incredible. You captured exactly what I want to say to ...

I really love this character, and now you need to find a story to put her in. You have many wonderful descriptions, and I'd love to see those dispersed throughout ...

I like this a lot; its very different and unique. One of a kind, which is excellent. Wonderful word choice, and its a great two-sided story. I dont know what ...

That was incredible. The way you used so many marvelous words in such a small space was great. The image you created was something i could really relate to, and ...

I thought this was fantastic. I dont have a single critic. Marvelous. Excellent word choice, and I can really feel the pressence and hear the conversation. Its a wonderful new ...

Its every girls dream. Its a good little story to put into words every girl's daydream, and the fact that it ended with the fairytale ending was so predictable it ...

It's great, and a wonderful reminder to all the readers to look at ourselves, and think "would we really do those things?" It's definetly good to do a self evaluation ...

Seems you have a good mind full of wonder. I recognize the piece as something I could relate to, so similar to my style I could have even written it. ...

Incredible story, and it was written with amazing talent, so I hate to be a critic. But the whole last line kind of threw me off. If it was taken ...

I think this is excellent. I love the style, and the changing of characters. I too was a bit confused at first, but I could tell by your writing abilitly ...