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Hey Ash! Angel's done all the nit-picking, so I'll have a go on the storyline. Description - This chapter wasn't big on description. It's fine the way it is, and ...

Ooh, this is good! I'm excited to read about this new idea you introduce. :D My already frigid blood seemed to grow colder. Not found him yet? What the hell ...

Hey, Ash! *screams with excitedment* I love this story, and I'm so excited to read it! :D CHAPTER SEVEN I was so consumed by my beating heart that I didn’t ...

Hey, Ash! I'm excited for this, but I can't really do a review right now. (Homework, hehe :lol: ) I'll come back later, and if I forget, PM me! :D ...

It is in the nature of the lies we speak. Falling into murky liquid pools. Permanence of the deception at its peak. Deaf to the silence, which was amended with ...

Hey, Myrcei! First, I'll go through and clear up the grammatical and punctuation errors. I'll tell you what I think of the poem at the end. :) Only in the ...

Jacob: Bells baby! Come here! Cross over to the reservoir so that I can sweep you into my arms and kiss you so passionately against your own will, that readers ...

Hey, Anna! I'm excited for this. I haven't read all of Alvalor, but I'll do my best with this! :) This included Millie and Max , who were at the ...

Hey, Untitled! (Yikes, that sounds weird.) Do you have a nickname? I'm Sunny. Welcome to YWS! I'll do my best with this. I knew it would kill me on the ...

“I am so nervous…” I admitted, as Cali brushed one more layer of bronzer across my face. "Ash, acting is a natural talent you have. [s]And[/s] D on’t worry, [s]and[/s] ...

who in the whispered gentle breeze a still small voice can hear, then please enlighten all else with its words, please tell the brooks, and so the birds. please tell ...

Are we made to simply survive? Are we made simply to survive? To dream, feel, and connect with one another? To dream, to feel, to connect with one another? Or ...

Hey, Winter! I've re-read this again, and I don't think there's much wrong with it. I'll go through and check just in case. :) The sky was still the pre-dawn ...

I guess everyone else has done the nitpicks. Mine will be more subtle. :) Do I have your attention now? Good, because you’re in for the ride of your life. ...

Hey, Winter! I'm excited to do this. I never get to read much Historical Fiction because the Romantic Fiction forum is so engrossing. :lol: All right: black bold is a ...