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Wow, that was really good! I was a little confused by the dates. At the top, it says 1994, but later on it says that it's set in the second ...

Wow... I feel really bad now :( So emotive, so powerful, oh this truely is incredible. I can't think of anything bad, other than the miss spelling of faliure, but ...

Other people's misery always makes me happy :) I liked the kind of big brother feel I got from it, that you should just do what they say and be ...

I personally have found it refreshing that people are harsh, and I think you are taking what people say too personally really. I find the people here wonderful and freindly, ...

I loved this piece, it really does reflect Horowitz's style. It was well described and I liked the plot, and all I could think to say was that Alex would ...

I only had time to read a little of it, and I think you should break it up into a few posts. It took me a while just to scroll ...

I agree. Perhaps a little more info, or a little more detailed. But I liked the amount of dramatic description crammed into that little space, it does make it (the ...

I liked this piece, it gives the reader a feeling of watching the world from outside of reality. I liked the bit with the seasons going by. Can I just ...

I liked how you managed to explain so much in just those few paragraphs. I liked the whole thing with his parents and the flashback, and the frustration. But maybe ...

I'm not that bothered about grammar and stuff, but I loved the tension and the horror bits. I would say that I couldn't put it down, but I'll have to ...

He was a scrawny, emaciated looking boy of ten or eleven with untidy blond hair. Why would you say ten or eleven years old? Is it because he doesn't know ...

oh, ohhh, ohhhhhhhhh! This is thrilling! I like the character of Emma, optimistic yet downtrodden at the same time, brilliantly original. I wasn't quite sure, however, that I understood why ...

I'm assuming that you meant to give more information to the reader later, but sometimes that isn't what the reader wants. I know that as a writer it is wonderful ...

My only real pointer is that from the detailed description I assumed that people were being hit my lightening and killed, and having their skull smashed in by the rain. ...

I don't want ot be too much of a critic so i'll keep this short. I liked the story and the charecters a lot, and it wasn't too rushed. However, ...