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Very Edgar Allen Poe-ish! Redrum approves. The words you use are a delicate balance of simplicity and elegance. You express a lot of energy, but at the same time I'm ...

No problemo. Thanks for the review :)

Wonderful poem, that's all there is to it. It has a great concept and it flows well. You kept up the pattern for each stanza and you were able to ...

That was such a sad story! Oh my gosh, I was about to start crying. That takes real talent to evoke such emotion. And the ending was so bittersweet. I ...

Haha, yes Vuzzycat, I wrote it myself.

I loved your review, very helpful indeed. Some parts of it I didn't quite understand where you were coming from, but hey, that's just me. I went back and added ...

Thanks so much! I'm glad you liked it.

Amen. It's all so true. Not bad for your first religious poem. I would have loved to see a little rhyme in it, but hey, that's just my personal opinion ...

This poem is beautiful, in a sad way of course. You could never tell it wasn't your usual style because the poem flowed so nicely. You should write more like ...

I absolutely loved this poem! The last two lines were a bit if-y because they didn't seem to flow into each other like the previous lines, but other than that ...

This story was pretty funny. Short yes, but I don't see any reason to lengthen it. I like how it really doesn't have a point to it, which that makes ...

Thanks for all the corrections. A lot of them I didn't catch in my own review. I don't really plan on telling more about Taint's history, at least not until ...

This poem is morbid, but amazing at the same time. The description in your lines really captured my attention and the story really makes you think.

Just for clarification purposes, the capitalization at the beginning of every line I did on purpose. I do that for all of my poems as sort of like my trade ...

This was an amazing poem. You have a great vocabulary and your similies and metaphors are phenominal.