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Re: The Mother's Wish
Thank you for your generous advise! I will make sure to edit some of the poem to make mother happy. :)
Jun 2, 2012 -
Re: Rushing
Hey, This a very beautifully written poem, and I understand exactly what you are saying. Thanks for writing a poem I can relate to! Your fellow writer, 04piegirl12
May 23, 2012 -
Re: Reality's Dagger
I changed the last stanza. Is it better?
Feb 15, 2012 -
Re: Math Love
I love math too! Go on Youtube and look up Mathmaticious. Super hilarious!
Feb 15, 2012 -
Re: Prologue
you should read my first chapter :) I like it a lot more then the prologue.
Feb 14, 2012 -
Re: Dragons and Riders: Chapter 1
That was really good criticism! I will try to tone down the bear killing a little more because I am also an animal lover. (My sister will probably kill me ...
Feb 13, 2012 -
Re: Project Perfect - Chapter 1
I love this so much! Project Perfect is definitely a story that I hope will continue. I also love your username and picture. :)
Feb 12, 2012 -
Re: White Iris - Chapter 1
I really liked it! Your description is absolutely amazing! You had better continue.
Jan 30, 2012