-KayJuran-

i'm glad i can type fairly well 'cause i almost NEVER write stuff up using a pen except for editing notes and when i don't have my laptop with me. ...

thanks. i can see i need to work on some things. i'll definately bear all of that in mind when i get to editing - i have to actually finish ...

tbr: im pretty sure a coronet is like a crown but just a circular band of silver or gold. thanks to you both for the comments

This was a pretty good poem. Make sure you capitalize your I's, though. You also need an apostraphe in "sorrow's" in the last line, since you are using it in ...

I'm just bumping this thread cause this is possibly one of my favourite things I've written, so please leave your comments. Thanks very much! :P ~KayJuran~

somehow i am going to have to refrain from asking you what happens. im still trying to find out who the people were talking about when they were talking to ...

sorry. i can give you a translation if you want. only reason i didn't is cause then people start critiquing the english version which isn't the original... i thought i'd ...

thats very lovely, SL. :) Ich hasse Milch! mmmm... aber Kuche sind lecker!

yeah it is pretty cliche lol. i can get away with that more when its not in english sometimes! ;) we were doing 'aber' and 'sondern' today in grammar and ...

do you think so? i hadn't thought of that but then i'm losing my english what with all the languages im learning! i wanted the emphasis on the last line ...

New update! There is a man, nigh sixty years. Nigh sixty years has he. And not quite almost sixty years, He has spent out at sea. With the moon in ...

Chapter I Heads turned at the unusually well-dressed man who walked into the tavern that night. Lace trimming at the end of his perfectly white sleeves, leather boots reaching to ...

Thanks J. You must have posted at the same time as I did! Anyway, I am now posting chapter 1 (though not quite finished) Haven't sorted prologue so not posting ...

Thanks erethror! I like free-writing as a sort of draft as well! Will hopefully have finished first draft of chapter one and prologue by tomorrow so I should be able ...

Looks like I'll have some more stuff soon! Some of you will be pleased to know I now have a general plot to it. I'll post what I've written sometime ...