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Heya Shina! Here's your overall review: MC As there are no other characters in this piece, all the focus goes to your MC; what she thinks, how she feels. You've ...

Heya Rose! Here's the overall review of your piece: Characters: Your MC comes to me as a good MC; egoistic, a bit self-centered and immature. I like that. Many writers ...

Nicole!!! Sorry it took me so long, but apparently I wasn't 'watching' my Will Review for Food thread :S Anywho, nit-pickys! My chair screeched noisily as I stood at the ...

Hi there, newbie :D I'm Kat *shakes hand* and I'm going to review this piece! :arrow: So, first of all, the first thing I noticed when I read this was: ...

Meeeeeeep! Thank you so much fro updating! I've been waiting for this for a while, now ;) Nit-picks: “Are you okay? You look… messed up,” I believe the comma at ...

Hey Miriam! I'm back. Sorry these reviews are taking so long, but you asked for my to review all the chapter, so. Anyway, on to nit-picks ! Their main characteristics ...

Hello Elena! I'm Kat, nice to meet you. I understand that you are new, but you have got to follow the rules. Please check them if you haven't. Here's the ...

I read Twilight. I read New moon. Then Eclipse, and then Breaking Dawn. Right now, I still like those. Sure, I do agree with the over description of the guy, ...

Evi! *chants* Hi! *waves* I really liked this ^^ I gate it a gold star! *totally clicked it* I didn't review at first, because I must admit I was intimidated. ...

Hey Miriam! I'm here, again ^_^ First of all, I'm liking this, but nothing has made my breathe stop, if ya know what I'm meaning. You told me your biggest ...

Hi Miriam... or Hannah... Anyway, I'm here! (as requested). You wanted me to review all the chapters? I'll see what I can arrange, but I think it will take a ...

Hey Darko! Nice to have you around again, floating the poetry forums ;) Kat's here for a review -- as requested! Let's get on to it! Stanza by stanza Lousy ...

Hey Carly! Kat's here -- again -- as requested! Did you see me cry…. When you left I died… How do these two relate? Make some connection. We are people ...

Hi Carly (again)! This is the third review, so I have two more to go. I won't do this one, as I did with the others, because basically you just ...

Hi Carly! *waves* I'm here for a review -- as requested! I haven't read the reviews above, so I'm sorry if I repeat stuff, 'kay? They have tracked me down ...