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Doing good so far! Keep going!

I agree. I liked it though. Very few errors. I like you character build up and I think this should turn out pretty good. Off to the next chapter!

I lie here in this dreaming state. Too often had I tempted fate. He came for me, dripping blood. A pointed finger, I understood. No final kiss. No one to ...

I liked this. It has a real deep feeling to it. It makes the reader think about his or her relationships with family or friends. Very good. Four stars. Keep ...

I would have to say A walk to remember....The movie was amazing but so was the i guess it would be a tie.

WOW!!!!!

Sorry guys! C.H. Stands for Cheshire House :P I am about to post chapter one so look out :P

Fairy- I understand what your saying, but before you start, please be aware there is a part one of this poem. I myself thought there were a few mature pre-teens ...

That's a good idea actually:) Can I steal the Can you see me????? Lol

Yeah Sorry bout that guys:( I meant to put the summary in italics but kind of yeah...sorry. I'm actually currently working on this particular chapter, because I know how important ...

Sure I'll pm you....I'm kinda at a wall right now but I should have some more up before the week is out:)

I'm kinda confused. I don't really get the point.....:(

Do you think I should start making Hallmark Cards? Seems everyone thinks so. I wrote this for my sister who almost died a few years ago. I was honestly and ...

Is there a sequel to this? Please tell me there is!!!! If so please post it!

Any critiques?