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Re: Parting
I don't know, I actually liked was unusual, but it was a good display of imagery. Nothings perfect so good job XD
Nov 2, 2011 -
Re: Silent Secrets Chapter 1 (Memories)
Thanks for all the comments guys! I just ask that you read all four chapters before commenting, otherwise it wont make sense. I have more and i will be posting ...
Oct 26, 2011 -
Re: The Space Between Infinity- 3
Please please please tell me your writing more?? Im hooked, im drawn in by the details...i can feels as if im actually there. You can never go wrogn with detail! ...
Oct 14, 2011 -
Re: Hands of Time
Check it out on youtube XD Im actually singing the song(: Ill post a link
Sep 9, 2011 -
Re: The Soul Collector- 3
I really liked it....the only thing I had a problem with was that it seems to be moving really fast. I mean, bring it out a little longer. You cant ...
May 12, 2011 -
Re: Don't Mistake This Smile
Wow Adrian. Im very impressed! I absolutely love it! -Eilin
Apr 19, 2011 -
Re: Dangerous Temptations 3
Cant someone delete this? Im redoing it all.
Apr 11, 2011 -
Re: Pull the Trigger
Thanks again guys! Im working on the manuscript right now, so I havent been able to post the next chapters, but Ill try as soon as I can!
Mar 17, 2011 -
Re: Pull the Trigger
Thanks Quibbs!
Mar 10, 2011 -
Re: Pull the Trigger
Thanks guys!
Mar 10, 2011 -
Re: Heart of the Irish ( title may change)
You know, I completely dropped this story...but now that I think of going to start it again! :) Look out for more!
Mar 8, 2011 -
Re: My Encounter With Satan
Only7 thing I would change would be the makes him sound girly:)
Mar 4, 2011 -
Re: Save Me
Thanks guys! Ive posted more so be sure to re-read it:D
Feb 11, 2011 -
Re: BURN chapter 2
Sorry its suppose to be trunk:) I changed it:)
Nov 5, 2010 -
Re: Allured Chapter 4
Pretty good. Kepp writing! I can't wait for the next chapter. I did not find that many errors so I won't mention them:)
Nov 5, 2010